Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Please critique an example of my writing! I am open to all comments ^.^?

It is quite an effective ruse (generally speaking) to just throw away the first: sentence, paragraph or chapter. Then your piece would start "The owner of the library etc" which grabs the attention of the reader because you have not established the characters - which library, the reader asks - and reads on ...................

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